A Very Rough Short Story...

So, I will start off by saying this is a rough draft that I wrote one night after not being able to sleep around 3 AM. I felt inclined to post this up, rough edges and all because I thought it would be fun to do and be a different side of my imagination. There really is a Washington Island, and some of the events are based off of actual things that have happened on the island. Of course, some things are purely fictional. So in short, I present to you a fictional story. Enjoy, or not.... 

Btw: Pos or Neg feedback is appreciated!

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